At this time we are requesting a revision, specifically of the level of detail given in the personality section. We would like to see more detail of your character's flaws, and more internal characteristics such as her personal hopes and fears, and how the events of her life have affected the way that her personality has developed and her interactions with other people.
Overall, we would like to see an application that is more in keeping with the standards of Ruby City (feel free to read other OC apps for examples), and a more relatable, rounded character shown in the personality section.
Feel free to submit your revision anytime before the next app cycle. Otherwise, we will consider the application dropped. Thank you, and let us know if there's anything we can help you with!
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time we are requesting a revision, specifically of the level of detail given in the personality section. We would like to see more detail of your character's flaws, and more internal characteristics such as her personal hopes and fears, and how the events of her life have affected the way that her personality has developed and her interactions with other people.
Overall, we would like to see an application that is more in keeping with the standards of Ruby City (feel free to read other OC apps for examples), and a more relatable, rounded character shown in the personality section.
Feel free to submit your revision anytime before the next app cycle. Otherwise, we will consider the application dropped. Thank you, and let us know if there's anything we can help you with!