Unfortunately, at this time we have decided to decline your application for this character. Your app, in addition to having been edited(The "Age" parameters have been removed from both the Player and the Character sections), has been recycled from when Bae was brought from a much earlier canon point, and despite the fact that the differences in pull points would have caused some noteworthy changes in his personality, you simply re-used your prior sample. This shows either a lack of understanding of how Bae's character has changed or a lack of concern for conveying it, neither of which indicate that you are the best choice to play him.
Additionally, we did not feel that either of your writing samples adequately portrayed Bae's character(and in the case of the Third Person Sample, did not even meet the requirements for sample length).
Thank you for your interest in applying, but our decision in regards to this application is final. Please feel free to contact us if you have any questions.
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Unfortunately, at this time we have decided to decline your application for this character. Your app, in addition to having been edited(The "Age" parameters have been removed from both the Player and the Character sections), has been recycled from when Bae was brought from a much earlier canon point, and despite the fact that the differences in pull points would have caused some noteworthy changes in his personality, you simply re-used your prior sample. This shows either a lack of understanding of how Bae's character has changed or a lack of concern for conveying it, neither of which indicate that you are the best choice to play him.
Additionally, we did not feel that either of your writing samples adequately portrayed Bae's character(and in the case of the Third Person Sample, did not even meet the requirements for sample length).
Thank you for your interest in applying, but our decision in regards to this application is final. Please feel free to contact us if you have any questions.