Thank you for your application. Unfortunately, at this time we have decided not to accept it.
There are several factors leading to this decision. Primarily we feel that your perception of the character in this application is not substantial enough. There is a great focus on Anderson's faith throughout the application, but it is only covered on a basic level (i.e., he is not denoted as Catholic whereas this is important within the canon). While you have captured his personality in an abbreviated sense, there is not enough given to show a full understanding of the character and his relationship with fellow canon-mates, nor enough information on Anderson's abilities or affiliations.
In addition to your apparent lack of grasp for the character himself, we feel that the overall writing shown in this application does not meet the standards that we would like to encourage in our cast at Ruby City.
You may re-apply if you so choose in two weeks time, but as this is the second time we have declined your application for this character, we will only permit one more attempt should you choose to try again.
[DECLINED]
There are several factors leading to this decision. Primarily we feel that your perception of the character in this application is not substantial enough. There is a great focus on Anderson's faith throughout the application, but it is only covered on a basic level (i.e., he is not denoted as Catholic whereas this is important within the canon). While you have captured his personality in an abbreviated sense, there is not enough given to show a full understanding of the character and his relationship with fellow canon-mates, nor enough information on Anderson's abilities or affiliations.
In addition to your apparent lack of grasp for the character himself, we feel that the overall writing shown in this application does not meet the standards that we would like to encourage in our cast at Ruby City.
You may re-apply if you so choose in two weeks time, but as this is the second time we have declined your application for this character, we will only permit one more attempt should you choose to try again.