At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. In particular, we would like more elaboration on his personality. Additionally, we would like to see different samples for your character, as we don't believe that the samples given adequately display Cloud's personality.
You may submit these revisions at any time in the next two weeks for review. After that we will consider the application dropped. Please don't hesitate to get in touch if you have any questions!
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. In particular, we would like more elaboration on his personality. Additionally, we would like to see different samples for your character, as we don't believe that the samples given adequately display Cloud's personality.
You may submit these revisions at any time in the next two weeks for review. After that we will consider the application dropped. Please don't hesitate to get in touch if you have any questions!