After careful review of your application and revisions, we have decided not to accept your application at this time. This decision is due to a multitude of factors, primarily the fact that even after revising your Personality section, you do not seem to have a firm grasp on your character's inner workings. Additionally, the writing samples you provided still do not provide what we feel is an adequate example of his voice.

Thank you for your application, and feel free to contact us if you have any questions.