The issue we had with the Personality section in this application stemmed primarily from its brevity and lack of depth; Cloud is a remarkably complex character, a deep thinker and a character with so much of his personality tied to his background and that of his game as a whole that the sample provided was overall insufficient.

Additionally, we felt that neither of the writing samples provided showed an adequate grasp of his voice and/or behavior.

If you'd like to perhaps canon review and try again, you are of course free to do so! All we ask is that you wait the standard two weeks before doing so, which ought to give you plenty of time to get a better feel for the character.

Thank you for your understanding, and as always, feel free to contact us if you have any further questions.