At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. Specifically, we are concerned about the World Information. Specifically we would like it to be clarified whether or not Jacqueline does in fact possess supernatural blood, and if so, what precisely that would mean for her. You're more than welcome of course to wait until she's been in Ruby City for a while before anything comes of her bloodline--or not--but either way we would like to see that you have a firm character concept in mind.
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At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. Specifically, we are concerned about the World Information. Specifically we would like it to be clarified whether or not Jacqueline does in fact possess supernatural blood, and if so, what precisely that would mean for her. You're more than welcome of course to wait until she's been in Ruby City for a while before anything comes of her bloodline--or not--but either way we would like to see that you have a firm character concept in mind.