At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. More specifically, we would like to see you develop your character's personality section a bit more, if possible through the aid of some canon examples. While it's short and concise, we would like to know a bit more about your character first.
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. More specifically, we would like to see you develop your character's personality section a bit more, if possible through the aid of some canon examples. While it's short and concise, we would like to know a bit more about your character first.