Thank you for your application. We have decided at this time, however, to decline your application for the following reasons;
1- AU Timeline - Your application cites the use of a timeline described as having been changed from that of the original. This is what is commonly referred to as an "Alternate Universe(or "AU")" Timeline. While some games do in fact permit "AU" characters, Ruby City does not.
2- Inappropriate Application Form - Given the utter lack of canon information for "The Witch's House" in general and for Viola in particular, there is simply no way that Viola could be apped as a canon character. She could at best be considered a Canon OC, and thus would be needed to be apped as such.
Beyond that, our initial revision requests would also still have applied; Concerning the personality, we feel as if there is something missing, and that we would need to know a little more of the character's inner workings(To clarify; We would like to know what "makes her tick," what her thoughts/feelings/motives/etc. are) before we can reconsider this part of your application.
We would also like to see a revision of your first person sample, particularly to see it in present tense and to give it more of a feel of an action post.
All of this in combination with the issue of plagiarism in your other application have led to this decision.
Thank you for considering Ruby City, and please feel free to contact us if you have any questions or concerns.
DECLINED
Thank you for your application. We have decided at this time, however, to decline your application for the following reasons;
1- AU Timeline - Your application cites the use of a timeline described as having been changed from that of the original. This is what is commonly referred to as an "Alternate Universe(or "AU")" Timeline. While some games do in fact permit "AU" characters, Ruby City does not.
2- Inappropriate Application Form - Given the utter lack of canon information for "The Witch's House" in general and for Viola in particular, there is simply no way that Viola could be apped as a canon character. She could at best be considered a Canon OC, and thus would be needed to be apped as such.
Beyond that, our initial revision requests would also still have applied; Concerning the personality, we feel as if there is something missing, and that we would need to know a little more of the character's inner workings(To clarify; We would like to know what "makes her tick," what her thoughts/feelings/motives/etc. are) before we can reconsider this part of your application.
We would also like to see a revision of your first person sample, particularly to see it in present tense and to give it more of a feel of an action post.
All of this in combination with the issue of plagiarism in your other application have led to this decision.
Thank you for considering Ruby City, and please feel free to contact us if you have any questions or concerns.
~Ruby City Mod Team