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Ruby City Mods ([personal profile] rubycitymods) wrote 2014-01-20 06:12 am (UTC)

REVISION REQUESTED

Thank you for your application.

At this time, we are requesting a revision on the personality section. In particular, we feel that the personality section does not adequately inform us on Ryuji's motivations and feelings, and some of the statements are vague, such as his motivations for challenging Yugi.

In addition, the flippant dismissal of manga canon may prove problematic when keeping in mind that there is another player of this canon in-game. We would like to know how you would approach this.

Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round and they will be processed asap!

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