Thank you for your application. At this time, we would like to ask for a slight revision; specifically we would like to see revisions of both of your writing samples, as at present we do not feel that they necessarily display the sort of writing quality that we would like to see in the communities. In the First Person sample specifically, some more/better action writing would be helpful, rather than the monologue that currently comprises its majority.

Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round and they will be processed asap!