Thank you for your application. At this time, however, we would like to request a revision to it before we make our final decision; Specifically, we would like to see more detail on Serah's personality, with a bit more of an in-depth look at her characteristics and personal motivating factors, rather than what has prompted various actions in her past. Additionally, you failed to provide anything in the actual "Background" portion of the Application.

Feel free to submit your revision anytime before the next app cycle, and your application will be processed as soon as possible. Thank you!