Before we consider it for acceptance, we would like to see a revision of the personality to give us more depth and insight into your character and her motivations.
We would also like to see a revision of the first person sample. Specifically, we would like to see it rewritten in the correct format, which is present-tense bracket spam as specified in the application guidelines.
Feel free to submit your revision anytime before the next app cycle, and your application will be processed as soon as possible. Thank you!
REVISION REQUESTED
Before we consider it for acceptance, we would like to see a revision of the personality to give us more depth and insight into your character and her motivations.
We would also like to see a revision of the first person sample. Specifically, we would like to see it rewritten in the correct format, which is present-tense bracket spam as specified in the application guidelines.
Feel free to submit your revision anytime before the next app cycle, and your application will be processed as soon as possible. Thank you!