Thank you for your application. At this time, we would like to ask for a slight revision; specifically we'd like to see more canon examples of Hans's behavior, rationale(EG- His search for an "honorable death," etc.), and overall driving forces.

We would like additionally to note that were we to accept Hans into Ruby City pending said revisions, due to your past history of bringing him in only to drop him shortly thereafter, this would make the third and final time that we would be willing to do so.

Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round and they will be processed asap!