At this time, we are requesting a new first person sample. While linking to examples in other games, memes and museboxes does fall in line with our rules, the example that you have given is rather outdated and we would prefer a more recent portrayal of your writing ability in this format.
Feel free to submit your revisions at any time before the next app cycle, and your application will be processed as soon as possible!
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time, we are requesting a new first person sample. While linking to examples in other games, memes and museboxes does fall in line with our rules, the example that you have given is rather outdated and we would prefer a more recent portrayal of your writing ability in this format.
Feel free to submit your revisions at any time before the next app cycle, and your application will be processed as soon as possible!