At this time, we have decided to decline your application. One of the primary reasons for this decision is in regards to Henry's personality; we feel that the personality section focuses more on canon backstory which is never explained, and fails to adequately describe his character. Additionally, the First-Person writing sample was written in the incorrect tense, an issue which was brought up with you multiple times for characters you previously had in the game. Lastly, we felt that the overall writing quality did not meet the standards we would like to see in Ruby City.
You may re-apply if you so choose in two weeks time. We wish you the best of luck in any future applications.
DECLINED
At this time, we have decided to decline your application. One of the primary reasons for this decision is in regards to Henry's personality; we feel that the personality section focuses more on canon backstory which is never explained, and fails to adequately describe his character. Additionally, the First-Person writing sample was written in the incorrect tense, an issue which was brought up with you multiple times for characters you previously had in the game. Lastly, we felt that the overall writing quality did not meet the standards we would like to see in Ruby City.
You may re-apply if you so choose in two weeks time. We wish you the best of luck in any future applications.