Before we accept it, we'd like to see more added into the personality. While what you have written fits with the character and we can see that you have a firm grasp of her, we believe that there is further information that could be supplied regarding Bella's motivations and actions.
In addition, we would like to request a revised First Person Sample, as we do not feel that the one supplied clearly shows your grasp of Bella's voice. Please note that samples can be linked from other games, museboxes and our own test drive as long as they are no older than six months!
Feel free to submit your revisions at any time before the next app cycle, and your application will be processed as soon as possible!
REVISION REQUESTED
Before we accept it, we'd like to see more added into the personality. While what you have written fits with the character and we can see that you have a firm grasp of her, we believe that there is further information that could be supplied regarding Bella's motivations and actions.
In addition, we would like to request a revised First Person Sample, as we do not feel that the one supplied clearly shows your grasp of Bella's voice. Please note that samples can be linked from other games, museboxes and our own test drive as long as they are no older than six months!
Feel free to submit your revisions at any time before the next app cycle, and your application will be processed as soon as possible!