Before we accept it, we'd like to see more added to the personality. While what we can see in your application is solid and accurate as far as we understand Kirei, we would like to see a little more elaboration on his conflict of character (good vs evil), on how events of his past have affected who he is today, and what he has gone through to achieve the appearance that he is 'disinterested'.
Feel free to submit your revisions at any time before the next app cycle, and your application will be processed as soon as possible!
REVISION REQUESTED
Before we accept it, we'd like to see more added to the personality. While what we can see in your application is solid and accurate as far as we understand Kirei, we would like to see a little more elaboration on his conflict of character (good vs evil), on how events of his past have affected who he is today, and what he has gone through to achieve the appearance that he is 'disinterested'.
Feel free to submit your revisions at any time before the next app cycle, and your application will be processed as soon as possible!