Thank you for your application. At this time, we would like to ask for a revision before we consider it for acceptance.
Specifically, we would like to see revisions to the samples given in your application. In the case of the First Person Sample, while we understand that Conan would be able to quickly come to the conclusions he reaches, we would like to see more detailed evidence of the mental deductive reasoning/detective line of logic that leads him to them.
For the Third Person Sample, we would like to see a better demonstration of his characterisation, potentially through further introspection, as we feel that in its current state it does not fully demonstrate who the character is.
Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round, and they will be processed ASAP!
REVISION REQUESTED
Specifically, we would like to see revisions to the samples given in your application. In the case of the First Person Sample, while we understand that Conan would be able to quickly come to the conclusions he reaches, we would like to see more detailed evidence of the mental deductive reasoning/detective line of logic that leads him to them.
For the Third Person Sample, we would like to see a better demonstration of his characterisation, potentially through further introspection, as we feel that in its current state it does not fully demonstrate who the character is.
Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round, and they will be processed ASAP!