At this time we are requesting a revision of the first person sample. Particularly, we noticed that it was written in past-tense, and also contained a shift to prose which does not fall in line with the standard of what we are looking for. We ask that you either edit the sample to remove the discrepancy (the usage of quotes and unbracketed actions) as well as shift the tense to present. You are correct; we are looking for third person present. We’d just like to see that the tense is correctly applied.
Feel free to submit your revisions at any time before the next app round, and they will be processed ASAP!
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time we are requesting a revision of the first person sample. Particularly, we noticed that it was written in past-tense, and also contained a shift to prose which does not fall in line with the standard of what we are looking for. We ask that you either edit the sample to remove the discrepancy (the usage of quotes and unbracketed actions) as well as shift the tense to present. You are correct; we are looking for third person present. We’d just like to see that the tense is correctly applied.
Feel free to submit your revisions at any time before the next app round, and they will be processed ASAP!