Thank you for your application. At this time, we would like to ask for a revision before we consider it for acceptance.

Specifically, we would like to see revisions to the personality section of your application. Our application guidelines request a three paragraph minimum for this section, and we would also like to see more detail given in regards to Erik's characteristics and motives.

Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round, and they will be processed ASAP!