At this time, we are requesting a revision on the personality section, as we feel there is too much history included, and would like to see more focus on Maleficent’s personality. While the inclusion of history to explain behaviors is acceptable, we think that the focus of the application should be on the personality for this section rather than historical background.
In addition, we noticed that the canon point is not included in your application, and would like to see that added as well.
Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round, and they will be processed ASAP!
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time, we are requesting a revision on the personality section, as we feel there is too much history included, and would like to see more focus on Maleficent’s personality. While the inclusion of history to explain behaviors is acceptable, we think that the focus of the application should be on the personality for this section rather than historical background.
In addition, we noticed that the canon point is not included in your application, and would like to see that added as well.
Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round, and they will be processed ASAP!