At this time, we are requesting a revision on the personality section. We would like to see further information relating to your character's personal motivations and overall characterisation. We encourage use of canon examples to back up personality traits.
Also, we would like clarification on a small portion of your character's background. The human mage origin surname 'Amell' is the name of a noble family of Kirkwall in the Free Marches, with the mother of the human mage origin confirmed as 'Revka Amell' through questioning of a character in Dragon Age 2. Additionally, as the Circle in which the mage origin takes place is canonly located on Lake Calenhad in Ferelden, we would appreciate explanation as to how your character's Circle was located in Orlais.
Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round, and they will be processed ASAP!
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time, we are requesting a revision on the personality section. We would like to see further information relating to your character's personal motivations and overall characterisation. We encourage use of canon examples to back up personality traits.
Also, we would like clarification on a small portion of your character's background. The human mage origin surname 'Amell' is the name of a noble family of Kirkwall in the Free Marches, with the mother of the human mage origin confirmed as 'Revka Amell' through questioning of a character in Dragon Age 2. Additionally, as the Circle in which the mage origin takes place is canonly located on Lake Calenhad in Ferelden, we would appreciate explanation as to how your character's Circle was located in Orlais.
Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round, and they will be processed ASAP!