At this time, we are requesting a revision of the personality section. We feel that there is a lack of clear personality and that what is included is too brief. Therefore, we ask that you expand on Apollo's traits, with more direct examples as to why he behaves the way he does, such as why Iris seems to have changed his outlook.
Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round, and they will be processed ASAP!
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time, we are requesting a revision of the personality section. We feel that there is a lack of clear personality and that what is included is too brief. Therefore, we ask that you expand on Apollo's traits, with more direct examples as to why he behaves the way he does, such as why Iris seems to have changed his outlook.
Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round, and they will be processed ASAP!