At this time, we would like to see a revision of the personality section. In particular, we feel the section reasons his personality type out more than it gives us information about his experiences shaping him. We would prefer to know more about the way he considers things, his motivations, and more on his regard for others, positive or negative, as this character appears to take his relationships and/or friends very seriously.
Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round, and they will be processed ASAP!
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time, we would like to see a revision of the personality section. In particular, we feel the section reasons his personality type out more than it gives us information about his experiences shaping him. We would prefer to know more about the way he considers things, his motivations, and more on his regard for others, positive or negative, as this character appears to take his relationships and/or friends very seriously.
Feel free to submit your revisions any time before the next app round, and they will be processed ASAP!