Before we accept it, we would like to see further detail given in regards to the personality section. While we understand that the area of canon in which the First Age Tolkien elves come from is as not widely expanded on as some others, we request some more detail on Fingon's personality traits as well as any canon examples that you feel would be relevant.
Feel free to submit your revision any time before the next application round and someone will view it asap!
REVISION REQUESTED
Before we accept it, we would like to see further detail given in regards to the personality section. While we understand that the area of canon in which the First Age Tolkien elves come from is as not widely expanded on as some others, we request some more detail on Fingon's personality traits as well as any canon examples that you feel would be relevant.
Feel free to submit your revision any time before the next application round and someone will view it asap!