At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. Specifically, we would like you to please examine and revise your application's First- and Third-Person writing samples, as they both bounce around a fair bit between past and present tense.
First-Person samples are to be composed of present-tense, script-style writing("bracket spam"), whereas Third-Person samples are to be composed of past-tense, prose-style writing(as you might tend to see in most novels).
Please feel free to submit your revision at your convenience, and we will be happy to look it over as soon as it comes in.
[REVISION REQUESTED]
At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. Specifically, we would like you to please examine and revise your application's First- and Third-Person writing samples, as they both bounce around a fair bit between past and present tense.
First-Person samples are to be composed of present-tense, script-style writing("bracket spam"), whereas Third-Person samples are to be composed of past-tense, prose-style writing(as you might tend to see in most novels).
Please feel free to submit your revision at your convenience, and we will be happy to look it over as soon as it comes in.
Thank you for your cooperation!