Thank you for your revision! Your Third-Person sample looks just fine, but there seems to be some confusion regarding your First-Person sample. We know you as a player have a history of great playing and are more than capable of making correct posts, so it's really only in the interest of fairness to the community that we'd like to ask you to revise your First-Person sample one more time.

[The mod switches typing format, in an effort to clarify. There's no good reason why this typing style is called "First Person," and not just "Present tense," and the mod knows that, but we're all pretty much stuck dealing with it. The mod shrugs, taking a sip of coffee.]

To clarify, this is the sort of thing we're looking for; The only issue with your sample was, again, that you tend to bounce between present- and past-tense. Since we as a community are trying to improve play quality, please be sure to keep an eye on that in the future! Thank you for your cooperation.