We think your app is very strong, and we appreciate you nerfing his future sight, haha, but could we have a bit more information as to how his personality has developed in his previous games? We understand that he hasn't developed a whole lot, but do you have any specific examples of the new experiences he's come into contact with, and how they've shaped his personality? A bit more elaboration in that section would be welcomed!
REVISION REQUESTED
We think your app is very strong, and we appreciate you nerfing his future sight, haha, but could we have a bit more information as to how his personality has developed in his previous games? We understand that he hasn't developed a whole lot, but do you have any specific examples of the new experiences he's come into contact with, and how they've shaped his personality? A bit more elaboration in that section would be welcomed!