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Dr. John H. Watson ([personal profile] flatmates) wrote in [personal profile] rubycitymods 2012-08-29 12:52 am (UTC)

Re: [REVISION REQUESTED]

Alright, here is a revision o/

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[It takes John a while to wake himself up, the rocking of the vehicle he's in not helping with his drowsiness. When he comes to, he recognizes the vehicle as a train, although it's not like the trains that take him down to Brighton, or even the tube…so he officially worries.]

Sherlock?

[The lack of response only makes his concern grow, and he wonders if the criminals they were chasing after had something to do with this.

Damn it, the last thing he needs right now is to be hauled off in a train, to God knows where. He thinks of two possibilities: One, he was in big trouble, or two…]


Mycroft, if this is your doing, I have to say you went a bit over the top with your kidnapping methods.

[There is more silence then, and John decides to opt for the safer means of communication: his mobile. But when he reaches into his pocket and finds himself with not a phone, but some sort of odd pocket watch, something in his head immediately clicks and he decides:

He's in big trouble.]

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