香港 ([personal profile] coffeewithtea) wrote in [personal profile] rubycitymods 2012-08-29 01:16 am (UTC)

Re: [REVISION REQUESTED]

[Hong Kong steps off the train, for a moment he appears unsure about what he has done. Thinking about it he can’t really recall ever getting on the train in the first place. The desolate station he is standing at offers no answers; everything is quiet save for the sounds coming from the train.

Hong Kong then lifts his hand and upon opening it a pocket watch is revealed. He gives it a brief quizzical look before he tries getting back on the train. That is not possible as the doors are shut and the train begins chugging along on its way.]


Now what?

[He does not expect anyone to answer him.]

So, I guess I'll be like be on my own or something.

[Since standing around the stations does not help him in any way he begins walking in search for anyone with information all the while fiddling with the pocket watch. All that time it does not occur to him that the pocket watch can be broadcasting a video of his every move. That is until then.]

That’s kind of lame.

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