At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. In particular, we would like more elaboration on his personality. We are not asking you to change the information provided, but would like to see more so we can be sure we have a clear view of your interpretation of the character, with links in to canon events that show some of his characteristics.
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. In particular, we would like more elaboration on his personality. We are not asking you to change the information provided, but would like to see more so we can be sure we have a clear view of your interpretation of the character, with links in to canon events that show some of his characteristics.