At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. Specifically, we are concerned about the personality section. The section as written, is a very complete and well written history. We would like to hear more of your interpretation of his personality, what characteristics define him as a person -- which can of course be backed up by specific events in his personal history.
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. Specifically, we are concerned about the personality section. The section as written, is a very complete and well written history. We would like to hear more of your interpretation of his personality, what characteristics define him as a person -- which can of course be backed up by specific events in his personal history.