At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. Specifically, we would like you to please examine and revise your Third-Person writing sample, as it does not match with the game's specifications. Third-Person samples are to be composed of past-tense writing.
Please feel free to submit your revision at your convenience, and we will be happy to look it over as soon as it comes in.
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. Specifically, we would like you to please examine and revise your Third-Person writing sample, as it does not match with the game's specifications. Third-Person samples are to be composed of past-tense writing.
Please feel free to submit your revision at your convenience, and we will be happy to look it over as soon as it comes in.
We look forward to hearing back from you!