At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. Specifically, we would like you to please examine and revise your application's Third Person writing sample, as you appear to have mistakenly written it in the wrong format. Third-Person samples are to be composed of past-tense, prose-style writing("logs").
Please feel free to submit your revision at your convenience, and we will be happy to look it over as soon as it comes in.
[REVISION REQUESTED]
At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. Specifically, we would like you to please examine and revise your application's Third Person writing sample, as you appear to have mistakenly written it in the wrong format. Third-Person samples are to be composed of past-tense, prose-style writing("logs").
Please feel free to submit your revision at your convenience, and we will be happy to look it over as soon as it comes in.
We look forward to hearing back from you!