At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. More specifically, we would like to see you develop your character's personality section a bit more, if possible through the aid of some canon examples. While it's short and concise, we would like to know more about your character.
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. More specifically, we would like to see you develop your character's personality section a bit more, if possible through the aid of some canon examples. While it's short and concise, we would like to know more about your character.