Thank you for your application.

At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. More specifically, we would like to see a revision of your First Person writing sample; As we have noticed in the past, you seem to have issues maintaining the present tense of "First Person" writing. Please correct this, and please also try to take more care when playing in future.

We look forward to seeing your revision, and then to seeing you in the game! Thanks in advance for your understanding.