Are you just asking for the First Person sample to be completely different but in the same tense, or just to make sure the tenses are the same throughout the original one?
Also, I am sorry I find it difficult to keep tenses the same in my writing. It's a bad habit which I am awake of and I will do my best to break it in the future.
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Also, I am sorry I find it difficult to keep tenses the same in my writing. It's a bad habit which I am awake of and I will do my best to break it in the future.