At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. In particular, we would like to see further discussion of some of the effects of darker emotions and events on her. Additionally, we'd like to hear your opinion and explanation on some of the different or difficult decisions she has made, including her choice to be with a cat from another Clan despite consequences.
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. In particular, we would like to see further discussion of some of the effects of darker emotions and events on her. Additionally, we'd like to hear your opinion and explanation on some of the different or difficult decisions she has made, including her choice to be with a cat from another Clan despite consequences.