At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. In particular, we would like to see both the 1st person and 3rd person samples fleshed out beyond what they are -- in particular to highlight the main traits of her character as discussed in your personality section. You can choose to augment your current samples or write different scenarios.
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. In particular, we would like to see both the 1st person and 3rd person samples fleshed out beyond what they are -- in particular to highlight the main traits of her character as discussed in your personality section. You can choose to augment your current samples or write different scenarios.