At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. Specifically, we would like you to please reconsider your personality section. At the present time, it gives us more of a synopsis of the series up to your chosen canon point, while we would prefer to see more about the character himself, his mentality and quirks.
Please feel free to submit your revision at your convenience, and we will be happy to look it over as soon as it comes in.
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. Specifically, we would like you to please reconsider your personality section. At the present time, it gives us more of a synopsis of the series up to your chosen canon point, while we would prefer to see more about the character himself, his mentality and quirks.
Please feel free to submit your revision at your convenience, and we will be happy to look it over as soon as it comes in.