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Personality: The loyalty that Loki shows for his family and friends has not been misplaced, he cares so much for his older brother that he willingly follows him and their friends – Frandal, Hogun and Volstagg - not only into the forbidden realm of Jotunheim but to the Valkyrie’s training camp, a place where no male is allowed to set foot all because he loves and wishes to protect Thor during their dangerous quest, even at the risk of his own life.
Though as time and Myth will tell he can be ruled by anger, hatred and the thirst for revenge, he strikes down without remorse a once trusted advisor who had not only betrayed The House of Odin but wished to lay waste to all of Asgard as well.
Loki is highly intelligent and unlike his brother has a thirst for knowledge, though he is skilled in hand-to-hand combat and with throwing knives as well, he can usually be found studying alone in his rooms or receiving lessons in sorcery with Amora the Enchantress, if he is not watching his brother train in the battle arena with the palace guards. Though sometimes his knowledge of magic and cockiness can unwittingly get himself and others in trouble but also out of it as well, though the owner of the bar he set on fire to aid in their escape might not be pleased with him for some time.
Often Loki feels shunned by the other Asgardians, sure they have to pretend to like him as he is after all a son of Odin Allfather but there are times that he catches a glimpse of distrust or even hatred slip through their masks as he walks by with a member of his family. He isn’t sure if it has something to do with his unusual coloring – raven black hair and green eyes are not normal in Asgard – or if it was because he is so magically powerful, either way their hidden disgust feeds his need to excel and prove him worthy for his title as the second Prince of Asgard, so for that he’s grateful.
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Personality:
The loyalty that Loki shows for his family and friends has not been misplaced, he cares so much for his older brother that he willingly follows him and their friends – Frandal, Hogun and Volstagg - not only into the forbidden realm of Jotunheim but to the Valkyrie’s training camp, a place where no male is allowed to set foot all because he loves and wishes to protect Thor during their dangerous quest, even at the risk of his own life.
Though as time and Myth will tell he can be ruled by anger, hatred and the thirst for revenge, he strikes down without remorse a once trusted advisor who had not only betrayed The House of Odin but wished to lay waste to all of Asgard as well.
Loki is highly intelligent and unlike his brother has a thirst for knowledge, though he is skilled in hand-to-hand combat and with throwing knives as well, he can usually be found studying alone in his rooms or receiving lessons in sorcery with Amora the Enchantress, if he is not watching his brother train in the battle arena with the palace guards. Though sometimes his knowledge of magic and cockiness can unwittingly get himself and others in trouble but also out of it as well, though the owner of the bar he set on fire to aid in their escape might not be pleased with him for some time.
Often Loki feels shunned by the other Asgardians, sure they have to pretend to like him as he is after all a son of Odin Allfather but there are times that he catches a glimpse of distrust or even hatred slip through their masks as he walks by with a member of his family. He isn’t sure if it has something to do with his unusual coloring – raven black hair and green eyes are not normal in Asgard – or if it was because he is so magically powerful, either way their hidden disgust feeds his need to excel and prove him worthy for his title as the second Prince of Asgard, so for that he’s grateful.