Before we can accept your application, we would like a revision of August's personality and his first person sample. What you have a is a good base for his personality, but we would like you to expand more by at least four sentences. The first person sample also needs to be expanded to display characterisation.
If you have any questions, feel free to respond here or contact someone from the mod team.
REVISION REQUESTED
Before we can accept your application, we would like a revision of August's personality and his first person sample. What you have a is a good base for his personality, but we would like you to expand more by at least four sentences. The first person sample also needs to be expanded to display characterisation.
If you have any questions, feel free to respond here or contact someone from the mod team.