At this time, we are choosing to request further revision to your application, on the grounds that it still seems to us that there is some discrepancy between the way Saber is portrayed in canon and the way she is being presented in your writing. Though you have clearly made extensive changes to your original application, your own headcanon which originally brought your portrayal into question still seems to be clouding the accuracy of your application; the second paragraph of the "Personality" section in particular causes us a great deal of concern.
As we mentioned before, while gender roles and Arturia's thoughts about them do not by any means necessarily comprise the bulk of her personality, they are still a fundamental aspect of her character and as a sensitive subject need to be treated carefully.
If you have any questions, feel free to respond here or contact someone from the mod team. Thank you for your cooperation.
[REVISION REQUESTED]
At this time, we are choosing to request further revision to your application, on the grounds that it still seems to us that there is some discrepancy between the way Saber is portrayed in canon and the way she is being presented in your writing. Though you have clearly made extensive changes to your original application, your own headcanon which originally brought your portrayal into question still seems to be clouding the accuracy of your application; the second paragraph of the "Personality" section in particular causes us a great deal of concern.
As we mentioned before, while gender roles and Arturia's thoughts about them do not by any means necessarily comprise the bulk of her personality, they are still a fundamental aspect of her character and as a sensitive subject need to be treated carefully.
If you have any questions, feel free to respond here or contact someone from the mod team. Thank you for your cooperation.