Third Person:He was afraid this would happened. Flicker had been set against the whole idea of splitting up the team to hunt spiders, and he had lost sight of the others. First order of business, figure out where he is, second order – find the others and return to the city. With a quick glance, he searched around and settled upon a particular tree to climb up in order to orient himself.
Easy does it, Flicker thought as he pulled himself up on the swaying tree. The wind made the climb rather uneasy, and the way the old elm seemed to groan worried him, he just hoped it wasn’t a dryad that would take offense at him clamoring over her. He dismissed the concern, as he figured if that were the case, she... er the tree would have whopped him already.
A loud creak made him pause. “Perhaps the oak was the better option.” He chuckled nervously to himself, just a little higher. Almost… Flicker reached up to the branch – just that one and he would get a good view over the treetops of the forest.
“Whoa-whooo-ah-ah!” With a nasty crack, the tree limb had given way under his weight. He was pitched heel over head, the ground rushed up towards the falling dragon. With a twist, Flicker had turned right side up and without a thought – his wings spread and caught the wind, it slowed his descent to a gentle float, then a hover.
“Oh… right! Wings!” He slapped his forehead before he zoomed up to break through the canopy. Now that he could see for miles around, it wasn’t long before he spotted his friends and led them back to Ruby City.
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Easy does it, Flicker thought as he pulled himself up on the swaying tree. The wind made the climb rather uneasy, and the way the old elm seemed to groan worried him, he just hoped it wasn’t a dryad that would take offense at him clamoring over her. He dismissed the concern, as he figured if that were the case, she... er the tree would have whopped him already.
A loud creak made him pause. “Perhaps the oak was the better option.” He chuckled nervously to himself, just a little higher. Almost… Flicker reached up to the branch – just that one and he would get a good view over the treetops of the forest.
“Whoa-whooo-ah-ah!” With a nasty crack, the tree limb had given way under his weight. He was pitched heel over head, the ground rushed up towards the falling dragon. With a twist, Flicker had turned right side up and without a thought – his wings spread and caught the wind, it slowed his descent to a gentle float, then a hover.
“Oh… right! Wings!” He slapped his forehead before he zoomed up to break through the canopy. Now that he could see for miles around, it wasn’t long before he spotted his friends and led them back to Ruby City.