At this time, we are requesting a revision of your samples. Specifically, we would like to see a first person sample that's a bit longer, perhaps with longer sentences and more detail.
The third person sample is showing some tense-shifting from present to past, and we would like to see these discrepancies revised as well. Keep in mind, for the third person sample, it must stay entirely in past tense.
Feel free to submit this revision any time before the next app round and it will be processed asap!
REVISION REQUESTED
At this time, we are requesting a revision of your samples. Specifically, we would like to see a first person sample that's a bit longer, perhaps with longer sentences and more detail.
The third person sample is showing some tense-shifting from present to past, and we would like to see these discrepancies revised as well. Keep in mind, for the third person sample, it must stay entirely in past tense.
Feel free to submit this revision any time before the next app round and it will be processed asap!