While we thought your app was very strong in most aspects--good job--we would like a little more information on how she interacts with people that aren't Ciel. How does she treat her other friends, or her family? As she's going to be in contact with total strangers upon arrival to the city, how does she act around strangers? Thank you for your application, and we hope to accept you soon!
REVISION REQUESTED
While we thought your app was very strong in most aspects--good job--we would like a little more information on how she interacts with people that aren't Ciel. How does she treat her other friends, or her family? As she's going to be in contact with total strangers upon arrival to the city, how does she act around strangers? Thank you for your application, and we hope to accept you soon!