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APPLICATIONS
✗ Applications are processed weekly, every weekend. The cut-off time for the submission of applications is 11:59PST on Saturday.
✗ Before applying, please read the FAQ and Rules pages.
✗ Please submit your application with the journal you plan to use if you have one made already. If not, another journal is fine, but we prefer your intended journal so it makes for an easier time in granting access to the mod journal and the contacts page.
✗ For very long applications, we would ask you to please separate them into various comments so that they will not take up too much of the page.
✗ Please title your application as { [CANON/CANON OC/OC]CHARACTER NAME || Series Title || reserve/no reserve || X of X } in the subect header
✗ IMPORTANT: Our application form was edited on September 07, 2015. Please use the revised form.
✗ If you are looking for an example of what an application should be like, please refer to the application here for an example of a canon character application, and here for an original character application.
✗ Canon Application
✗ Canon OC Application
✗ OC Application
A note for CR AU applications
Ruby City does allow previous game history/CR to be brought over on a case by case basis. If you want to include this in your application please add additional sections for PERSONALITY DEVELOPMENT and PREVIOUS GAME HISTORY beneath the Personality and Background/History sections.
In these additional sections we would like to see a brief outline of your character's previous game history and how it potentially impacted on and altered their canon personality.
[REVISION REQUESTED]
At this time we are requesting a revision before we consider your application for acceptance. Specifically, we would like you to please examine and revise your application's writing samples, as we feel that they do not meet the standards we would like to see in actual gameplay. Both samples need to be proofread and touched up(not necessarily rewritten in their entirety), and the writing in your Third Person sample wavers a few times between past and present tense(Third Person writing needs to remain in the past tense).
We look forward to seeing your revision, and then, hopefully, to seeing you in the game! Thanks in advance for your understanding.
[REVISION REQUESTED]
first person:
[She gets off the train and stands on the platform, unsure of where to go or what to do. Jade is utterly confused. First, why is she on a train when she is supposed to be on a ship that's physically impossible for her to leave? Second, if this is a dream bubble (and she can’t enter dream bubbles either) then why can’t she remember this place? It’s not from any of her memories and this doesn’t resemble any other dream bubble she has been in before.
She is contemplating her next move when she realizes there is a heavy weight in her pocket. She pulls out the pocket watch with no idea where it comes from as she has not owned such a watch before. Staring at it for a while before she opens it up and starts pressing random buttons, she manages to turn it on and decides to maybe try and communicate with someone, not realizing in fact that she's now speaking to the whole city.]
This city is certainly strange; this can’t be a dream bubble, right? This is no memory I can recall!
[She isn’t looking at the watch; more of the buildings around her.]
Sooooo, does anyone here have answers? Or can anyone at least tell me where I am?? It would be nice to know where this place is!
[She smiles at the watch.]
So, if anyone is out there, please reply asap!!
[The feed cuts off as Jade starts her own search for an answer now.]
Third Person
It has been one year since the journey across the golden yard began.
If she was being honest with herself, not a lot had happened in that one year. Not that she was surprised though. With her powers controlling the ship and the fact that the golden yard won’t let them enter dream bubbles, there wasn’t anything out there but the void when they slept. So, the ship was the only place for Jade.
There was nothing she could do but sit and wait the three years out.
Jade didn’t mind though, since she spent most of life alone on her isolated island. Being surrounded by people for the first time was a good feeling, and although she could count on the palm of her hand how many of them she could have an intelligent conversation with she really didn't mind. It’s a good feeling, having someone to play games or have a chat with. In some strange way, it was like having a normal life with no care in the world.
On the other hand though, her time on the ship made her miss the days of playing sburb with her friends. She missed the adventure and having an important role and something to actually do. She missed Dave and Rose, and even the trolls she hasn't been able to meet yet. She sometimes wondered what they are doing on the meteor, if they were thinking the same things she was. She wanted to meet her grandpa – the kid version of him, she wanted to meet him and finally get a chance to talk with him. She wanted to help them to fix their game and beat it, and maybe they can all finally have their happily ever after.
But the reality was that she must wait, like everyone else on the ship and on the meteor. In the meantime, she will spend her time playing games with John and listening to Davesprite’s jokes, helping out Nannasprite with baking, trying not to scare Jaspersprite too much and play with the consorts when she can.
Because it’s another two years before the real adventures begins.
ACCEPTED
After you have done this, post to the Contacts page, Tag Request page, the Taken Characters page and, if you know where your character will be living, the Residences page! Familiarise yourself with the Rules and FAQ and introduce yourself at
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